Writing a script

Im writing a script for a short film titled "If I cant have her". The story follows a couple Josh and Sabrina young adults who after dating for a few years break up. Well Sabrina had a stalker who has been absent for some time. But when the stalker is outside her house she decides the only person she can go to is Josh. As events unfold you see them try and rekindle some spark they once had, all while the stalker makes more bold moves then ever before... Below is some of the script ive been writing let me know if you wanna see more! (edited)