Спільнота Flame

Проба пера англійською, що скажете про фрагмент? Варто продовжувати?

"He opened his eyes in a shallow slightly burned crater that was full of ash. Setting sun painted forest-like surroundings in reds and pinks, unknown life rustled all around, but something felt wrong. Everything felt both familiar and alien at the same time, that made him feel deeply uneasy: he... детальніше