Profile advice?

I don't seem to get many likes on my profile across multiple apps. Am I doing something wrong on writing my profile? Is it too verbose? Or is it just I'm simply not an attractive individual? I started losing weight and doing martial arts (hema) to get a bit more fit but have not seen any interest at all from women in my area. Can I get some genuine advice to improve my profile? (I generally set all of them up the same as on here)