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So I have two opposing religious groups in my last saga. They are not prominent within the story but add depth to it. Coming up with ideas for them this is one. The religions are built around soul spirit will and faith these are the four pillars of ones remnant. Vy,na is life force for context

Night had fallen over the inland city of Vaelor, and the amphitheater carved into black basalt was lit not by torches but by suspended spheres of pale sorcery that pulsed in slow rhythm with Lira’s breathing; the Day-Bound had called for public testimony, the Night-Reflection had answered with... (edited) read more

So if I may ask for your thoughts on this scene I'm currently working on. Basically the group Eira Throne keal lira have entered the city of Vaelor and have found themselves caught up in the religious groups of Day/Night. I don't read like you lot but does it grab readers attention?

Night had fallen over the inland city of Vaelor, and the amphitheater carved into black basalt was lit not by torches but by suspended spheres of pale sorcery that pulsed in slow rhythm with Lira’s breathing; the Day-Bound had called for public testimony, the Night-Reflection had answered with... read more

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Having been sick for over a week, i finally was able to go out for a hike with my little one. I had very little stamina, but I'm proud of myself for doing it. Life is just getting better and better, so i can accept the lows as what it is, instead of why did it have to be. Sunshine on my skin, ... read more

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I read a quote that said, "You can be the prettiest shade of green, but you'll never be enough for someone whose favorite color is blue," and it really stuck with me.

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You can be the prettiest shade of green, but you’ll never be enough for someone whose favorite color is blue,” and it really stuck with me.