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Posted Sunday, November 12, 2023

7mo

INFP

Gemini

8

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Spaceship system Captain! If you look over, there are a few planets named after our previous rulers who are energetic like you. They traveled everywhere until they soon fell in love with another species from Paradise Planet, who were organized as a union of Different aliens to find a safe Haven to live their lives. Odessa That is so boring, where is fun, things like dangerous actions. Spaceship system My Captain, my orders were to help you understand your mother's traditional rulers before you, training to learn history and experience trading too. Odessa So I wouldn't be trapped on this ship all galaxies hour? Oohs, so where is the nearest trading post? I want to buy them gifts so I can get them out of the way. Spaceship system. The trading outpost is 1000 lights away but first is the history lessons. And education for Undercover for you. Your Highness. Just in case of rival opportunities. Odessa Like the sound of secret work! Teach me! As she looked happy. The spaceship system captures her smile on video recording and sends it to her home planet's ruler. Goal entertained the Heir complete. Goal keep the Heir Save at all costs. Goal returns her home. ( Any accidents or damage to the ship will send out a beacon to save her) Odessa Look over there it is Dwarf Stars around 8 Planets. Spaceship systems Scanning the whole galaxy for dangerous criminals. 2 bandits ships. I've been nearby alert. Spaceship system ( worried) Your Highness going out of Territory into Unknown, please remind in your seat. Odessa  Oh, alright, as she puts on her belt over her. Systems alert Incoming Lazer beam blast! Preparing  Military Weapons Preparing to fire in 3 seconds. Bandits ships Are leaving after a firefight. There are few gazed shots on the outer hull. Report the incident to record for homeworld. Odessa Are we out of dangerous areas? Ooh, that Planet looks  like Paradise Planet, I want to claim our territory when I finish it.  It would be great for the union. Spaceship system Scanning nearby planets Few selections of planets Their names appear on the screen. Earth. Venus. Mars. Neptune. Saturn. Mercury. Jupiter. Uranus. Planet nine. ( spaceship system  named  it Ning Xi ) Odessa I hope you make notes on this by sending it home. (an achèvement for the last ruler) Spaceship system Why list of the ruler. Instead, the only beginnings ruler? Odessa  because I can't seem to fall in love with my kind. Got is a trait received from my father. My mother doesn't even mention him at all, like he was a traitor to us. Or he left me and my mother. But in truth. I never like guys on my cord. So I thought, why not an arranged marriage instead? But nobody knew it at the time. That I don't like them all. So, I told a few guards, ladies. They were pleased to know she found interest in one person. Spaceship system It was your dream girl? Was it? Another trait from your father was that he was alien with future insight on his lovers, who would take care of his kin and love him. I guess with that what it's like? Who knows for sure?     Odessa What is wrong with ship systems isn't responding to me. System Emergency  Beacon has been launched into space. System   Spaceship's interior hull is 30% damaged System Crashing down to Earth- Unknown Weather's Unknown  Aliens. System activated Emergency  Mode Rebooting after impact into local trees away from civilization cities. Oh no! As Odessa strapped herself into her seat. This is not good. As the spaceship crashed into the forest. And a human lady almost got hit by the alien spacecraft. As the lady runs away. And spacecraft open its doors. As I wear my spacesuit. And reactive spacecraft with emergency mode. As told the system we are on earth they're are so many strange structures off in distance. Emergency systems Your Highness! Need disclose your identity these creatures  must be  lacking our technology advancement so please hide yourself when you out explore the planet. As Odessa Transformation of her body to looks like a human. As her eyes are black and her hair is brown with a little blonde. And she looks like a model. Emergency systems When did you capture human images. As soon as spaceship notice Naughty model Photoshoot on paper. Your Highness  not that Please! Change back Right now. That's not good for you disclose yourself as something so Disgusting.   Chapter 2, ( i made original story)